John and Jen - Elements 1

John was young, almost adolescent, brash with boiling blood of early youth. At the same time, he did not mind helping people who were merely using him for their own interests. Jen was younger, almost childish, not so good looking, pampered by her parents as she was their only child. John and Jen lived right across each other, their lines crossed only when John thought so, their eyes met only when John turned his head in her direction, their lips opened only when John accepted thanks for his gratitude.

John was like soaring eagle, sky was his limit, John was Jen's sky. Every move that John made flipped like a coin for her. Every word that he said sounded like love strung symphony to her.

Inevitable happened. There was love and thus there was possibility of ecstacy or rejection.

John had his intentions clear and rational mind in place. Jen was in love and she knew everything except rationality.

She asked him if he can own her forever, but how can you expect for wind to stay in one tree? How can you expect a bee to enjoy just one fragnace? How can you expect the sea to stay at one shore?

Who is wrong?